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my heart as it beats

June 13, 2013
By angel32712 SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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"shoot for the moon, fall short and land upon a star"

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my heart as it beats,you give it no peace
as i lay my weary head to sleep,it drifts to you the one that has me for keeps
the only way to describe how i feel is by my heart as it beats
when you are close it flutters like a butterfly
when you leave it starts to heave in sadness
then you call just the way you did when you started it all
you took my way of life the heart as it beats

© Louisa L., Pleasanton, CA

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what inspired me is my boyfriend who is also my bestfriend for three years
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angel32712 SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2013 at 9:51 am
angel32712 SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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&quot;shoot for the moon, fall short and land upon a star&quot;

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thank you jenna i tried my best
DarknessHasFallen GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2013 at 5:46 pm
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This is so sweet and Romantic!!! I love this one!!