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I'll Wait For You

May 31, 2013
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski


I'd take you away from here if you asked. 
Only answering, "Where to?"
I'd hand over all my possessions to buy you 
One moment of happiness.
I'd walk a million miles—no, as far as it takes—
To be near you, 
Or to bring you back the moon and sun.
I'd fight a thousand, million soldiers, if it meant
Being your one and only.
And yes, I'd break my heart over and over, 
Forever, 
To feel one ounce of reciprocated love.
But it's only at your call, 
Your plea, 
Desire, 
Need, 
one
Word 
From your beautiful lips:
Now. 
So I wait for now. 



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on Jun. 9 2013 at 10:46 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Aww thank you :)

HazelGrace said...
on Jun. 9 2013 at 6:19 pm
Omg im crying this is perfect gahhh I am so critical but I have nothing to criticize ahhhhh 

on Jun. 9 2013 at 6:09 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Thank you, that means a lot :)

SongBird04 said...
on Jun. 9 2013 at 5:58 pm
SongBird04, Littleton, Colorado
0 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
You've gotta take the good with the bad, smile when you're sad, love what you got and remember what you had. Always forgive but never forget, learn from your mistakes but never regret. People change and things go wrong but always remember life goes on

Hi Jade! :)  I love your stuff, it's very well written and creative! I hope you keep writing 'cause you're very good at it! I also love that sometimes you write about faith. It's touching! Well, keep it up and wonderful job! (:

on Jun. 8 2013 at 7:20 am
IndigoElisabeth SILVER, Woodbury, New Jersey
5 articles 1 photo 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
John 1:1

This one is so good! It's a little different from your other poems somehow, I think. But it's still fabulous!

on Jun. 4 2013 at 12:02 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

No problem :D Anytime!

on Jun. 3 2013 at 10:38 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

thank you very much (:

on Jun. 3 2013 at 10:38 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

You never cease to amaze me with your wonderful feedback! Thank you sooo much!

on Jun. 3 2013 at 10:37 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

thanks, you're sweet (;

on Jun. 3 2013 at 9:51 pm
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.
Then bicycles were chainless,
Carriages were horseless,
And many laws enforceless.

Next cookery was fireless,
Telegraphy was wireless,
Cigars were nicotineless,
And coffee caffeineless.

Soon oranges were seedless,
The putting green was weedless,
The college boy was hatless,
The proper diet fatless.

New motor roads are dustless,
The latest steel is rustless,
Our tennis courts are sodless,
Our new religion — godless.

gee, this poem makes me sad Jade. I hope you find him soon:P

on Jun. 3 2013 at 7:58 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

You never fail to amaze me with your innovative ideas for poems. This is desperately beautiful. :D Great job and have a nice evening!

on Jun. 3 2013 at 7:53 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
59 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

i love this!!! very deep :)