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Unparalleled, Unequalled, Unconceivable

May 24, 2013
By GraphicWriter DIAMOND, Yuba City, California
GraphicWriter DIAMOND, Yuba City, California
63 articles 10 photos 89 comments

It sounds like a bad rap
A title that repeats itself
Like a broken record.

It looks like an unfinished thought
Words with similar understanding
But no direct meaning.

It feels like a metaphor
For someone of perfection
But what are you comparing?

It tastes like a dream
Putting personification to unnatural plots
Like lyrics of a song.

It transforms to whatever you perceive
A small sample of thought
The surrealism in poetry.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Jun. 25 2013 at 3:05 pm
Rolledthestone SILVER, Nowhere, Other
8 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You hypocrite, first take the plank out of your own eye, and then you will see clearly to remove the speck from your brother’s eye." (Matthew 7:5) and "All the poeple who supported slavery were free, all the people who support abortion live..."

Ooh I liked this. Poetry along with everything else, really is just what we precieve it to be.

on Jun. 15 2013 at 1:28 pm
GraphicWriter DIAMOND, Yuba City, California
63 articles 10 photos 89 comments
Thank you, I really appreciate your words in the appreciation of my own. It was something I didn't mean to write but just came out by itself. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

on Jun. 15 2013 at 1:08 pm
BlackbeltJames GOLD, Reading, Other
14 articles 0 photos 193 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isaac Asimov - "Intelligence is an accident of evolution, and not necessarily an advantage.”

It seems almost random at first, but gradually it builds on you and you understand it. What you do write is also very clever, although simplistic at times, but that works to its advantage.