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Young Love

May 10, 2013
By Poetry2Love SILVER, Bronx, New York
Poetry2Love SILVER, Bronx, New York
8 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Keep your face to the sun and you will never see the shadows.” ~ Helen Keller


Young Love
Standing at the doorway
With a bouquet of roses 
In hand, the sweet song 
Of Love escaping it's mouth.

Young Love
Overflowing with the
Excitement  of a new
Experience with 
Every word, every ice cream cone shared,
All the movies watched together, with no arguments made

Young Love
Knows not of dishonesty,
Or discomfort,
But of Laughter, care, & kisses.

Young Love
 Pierces the heart
And engulfs the body, it injects such joy 
into the veins It is found in the lives 
of only a few and it doesn’t judge;
 with the fools and the wise young love is found. 

Young Love
It watches the soul and tenderness of the heart to
see if it is worth the sacrifice, it comes from the parts of the world;
 down below or high up. 
And with every passing day a new love is made.
 To produce
more Love in different ways.

Young Love, Awaits.....


The author's comments:
I hope that whoever is reading this right now, knows that, that special someone is out their and will show you Love. It just takes time.

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on Oct. 5 2013 at 3:58 pm
DarknessHasFallen GOLD, Broomfield, Colorado
12 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm fine. I just feel like I'm shattered into hundred of little shards of glass and I'm going to hurt everybody who loves me.

This poem is fantastic!!!!  I think that you should show this to people who would apprciaste it more because that is what this poem deserves.

on Aug. 24 2013 at 4:36 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

It's a nice poem. Very, very nice imagery. Pretty original. Good job! :D 4/5

Zach_M BRONZE said...
on Aug. 23 2013 at 3:46 am
Zach_M BRONZE, Andersonville, Tennessee
3 articles 0 photos 30 comments
I thought this was really cute, and very original. The thought of young love is very refreshing and everyone can relate to it. I love how you expressed it so freely, just like the reality of young love is suppose to be felt. I really admired reading this; wonderful job

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 7 2013 at 5:05 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
1 article 0 photos 405 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

#foreversingle. just kidding, this was great and gave me hope:)

on Jun. 1 2013 at 1:22 pm
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
23 articles 2 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.&rdquo;<br /> -Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> &quot;I&#039;m just a little bit caught in the middle,<br /> Life is a maze, and love is a ridde.&quot;<br /> -Lenka

This was really pretty! I can see the emotions in it, and the descriptions were so detailed :) really nice job, keep it up!

on May. 31 2013 at 10:12 pm
Kaylaa_Nicole_ SILVER, Smyrna, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments
This was great, I think many can relate and if not, hope to someday. Thanks :)

on May. 25 2013 at 8:53 pm
Poetry2Love SILVER, Bronx, New York
8 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Keep your face to the sun and you will never see the shadows.&rdquo; ~ Helen Keller

Thank you!

on May. 25 2013 at 8:49 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
4 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was Born from a Boom-Box

That was very Beautiful