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Relentless

May 13, 2013
By Poetry2Love SILVER, Bronx, New York
Poetry2Love SILVER, Bronx, New York
8 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Keep your face to the sun and you will never see the shadows.” ~ Helen Keller


Relentless, saying no more mess, no more stress, God granted me these things because he was relentless.
Cold days and dark nights when I felt hopeless God did not worry for he knew he was my fortress. God did not wobble, he did not even move, because when I was shaky, he knew there was nothing to fear.
He saw my hurt, my pain and my tears, but he was relentless, he knew there was nothing to fear. When the world turned away, and fear and hats just wouldn't stray God was relentless, and here I am today. So many thoughts going through my head from all the stories and scriptures read. God was there, because he was relentless. When I had no one to look to, or even address God touched me and said, "My love is relentless". I walk with Christ because that love has kept me throughout my troubles it was God who fought for me. God never relents when it comes to me, so in seeking you, God, relentless, I will be.


The author's comments:
God love is Relentless.

GNT( Good News Translation) John 3:16 For God loved the world so much that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish(die) but have eternal life.

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on Feb. 25 2014 at 8:24 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
70 articles 5 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.&rdquo;<br /> <br /> ― Mary Oliver

i like this. it reminds me of my poem, the Corinthians Verse  

on Jun. 28 2013 at 6:16 pm
Poetry2Love SILVER, Bronx, New York
8 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Keep your face to the sun and you will never see the shadows.&rdquo; ~ Helen Keller

Thank you! thanks for the suggestions and i promise to keep them in mind. Please read more of my work.

on Jun. 28 2013 at 6:07 pm
Poetry2Love SILVER, Bronx, New York
8 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Keep your face to the sun and you will never see the shadows.&rdquo; ~ Helen Keller

Thankk You! I appreciate that.

SongBird04 said...
on Jun. 10 2013 at 1:30 am
SongBird04, Littleton, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You&#039;ve gotta take the good with the bad, smile when you&#039;re sad, love what you got and remember what you had. Always forgive but never forget, learn from your mistakes but never regret. People change and things go wrong but always remember life goes on

I agree that the format could be a little better, but the words were nice. :) It's refreshing to see other Christian poetry out there! Sometimes I feel like I'm the only one. But I'm glad to see this!! Nice job, and God bless you. :)

on Jun. 8 2013 at 5:47 pm
kikixkupkake GOLD, San Marcos, California
17 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The things that walk out when we open our minds.&quot; -Dylan McCoy

As a Christian myself, this poem is very, very true and beautiful. Of course I have to out some critique, so maybe you could have separated the lines a little better because the all blended together and it was a bit difficult to understand the rhyme. But it was honestly such a great poem! I love this

on Jun. 7 2013 at 7:27 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

Hey, it always makes me feel amazing when I find a fellow Christian on this site ^_^ You should check out some of the latest work of Jade.I.Am. if you haven't already. Especially her poem "The Condemned Word." Anyways, have a great day! :D

on May. 31 2013 at 10:15 pm
Kaylaa_Nicole_ SILVER, Smyrna, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments
Beautiful. I love how strongly you felt and expressed your relationship with Him. Inspiring as a Christian.

on May. 25 2013 at 8:50 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
4 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was Born from a Boom-Box

That was very lovely and deep i agree on it.