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Chat Room Relationship

April 20, 2013
By ChobaniLuvinPenguin PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
ChobaniLuvinPenguin PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"What makes the desert beautiful is that somewhere it hides a well."
― Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince

Let my feelings for you
be measured by the length
of computer wire
And present in the hum
that goes on forever
like the beating of my heart
The clacking of keys
that is heard on both ends
makes us one,
makes us whole
But it is really
the path of the arrow
on my brightly glowing screen
as I trace your words
that points out the strong bond
between us

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JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2014 at 11:27 am
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

This is extremely well written, just amazing! A lot of people can relate to it, and I've never read anything like it before. Great job!

on Mar. 29 2014 at 7:03 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

This is amazing!! :D I love it ;3 Good job.. :3 5/5 stars