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Slowly Fading

March 21, 2013
By Whitehouse503 SILVER, North Waterboro, Maine
Whitehouse503 SILVER, North Waterboro, Maine
7 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end you should always do the right thing, even if it's hard."

fresh tears gather in my eyes once again
when the old ones dry, new ones itch to get out
my heart, where my darkest secrets are stored, can not take this anymore
but there's nothing I can do to stop
I can't stop
and I don't want to
I deserve to feel like this
I deserve to die
I curl up in the middle of my bed
and let every single tear I have escape me
when there's nothing left inside of me,
I close my eyes and slowly,
I let myself fade
and I let my heart slowly stop beating

The author's comments:
haven't published something in forever, thought it was time :)

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on Aug. 14 2013 at 5:45 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."

"Can't get no more free randy!"

Wow... that escalated quickly... haha Really good, for some reason when you said and I'm paraphrasing because you can't scroll up when commenting ... grr TI -.- but you said that you store the dark secrets in your heart that resonated with me because the heart is this sort of... light and lovely organ and it kind of gave me this mental image of these secrets burdening you and turning your velvet heart into this crippled little thing until you eventually... fade away. Anyways just my thoughts. Great job.

on Apr. 22 2013 at 8:55 pm
TheNamesBond....JamesBond BRONZE, Galloway, New Jersey
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Absolutely terrible. I hated it! Keep up the good work! I liked it.

on Apr. 21 2013 at 3:35 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

really great job! includes just enough information, yet still has a mysteriousness to it. i really like it. five stars!

on Mar. 28 2013 at 2:49 pm
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont let people drive u crazy if you know its in walking distance

nice emotion, i wouldve structured it differently with mroe exagerated terms to get my feeling across ersonally though. but overall god stuff!

on Mar. 28 2013 at 2:46 pm
LiveLov3Hate BRONZE, Queens Ny, New York
1 article 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
No point of hating when you can only forgive with no value

Its so touching!!!

on Mar. 27 2013 at 3:15 pm
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

I love it i have felt like that a lot before good work

on Mar. 27 2013 at 2:41 pm
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.


on Mar. 27 2013 at 10:02 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

so sad.....

Payne said...
on Mar. 27 2013 at 9:29 am
This poem gave me chills... nice job