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Waiting Room

February 12, 2013
By Depressed-Ness SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
Depressed-Ness SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
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You can wish apon a star, but only you can make the dream come true.

You dont need boys, boys need you.

Waiting room,
I sit here To learn about whom,
All alone,
With No one here,
Waiting room,
I feel so lonely,
Hospital waiting rooms,
I can't say I like them,
Truth is ,I've seen them a lot,
I sit here every week,
Same room, Same chair,
It's not really fair,
I do like the silence,
The dullness in you
Tells me that you're sad,
Its not bad to be sad,
But you're bringing me down too.

The author's comments:
I made this poem while waiting to see my Nana in the ICU in the hospital.

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on Sep. 30 2013 at 1:06 am
SpidersAcrossStars PLATINUM, Hayward, California
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For you, a thousand times over.

This is really good. Nice job :)

on Mar. 22 2013 at 5:11 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Oh wow! This is a good one, how the simple, short lines help to capture the waiting room feel. (I dont know about you, but something aboht their pristine look and overly merticulous set up smothers all thought.) Its always hard being the one in the chairs. Great job, Goku! I knkw i promised when i first camr to TI (as LoudDreamer) I'd look at some of your work, but it only took me a couple years. ;)