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A cry for Affection

February 10, 2013
By ValleyMae13 GOLD, Kingsville, Texas
ValleyMae13 GOLD, Kingsville, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who Endure, shall be saved" Mark 13:13

No one cares about this article,
Its just words from someone you don't know,
words from someone with a broken heart,
that they wouldn't dare to show,
and as I write these words,
I feel I cannot breathe,
because the world that is around me,
is solely beginning to leave,
Ill tell you about my self,
Even though you wont take it to mind,
that once I lost my self,
and was surely hard to find,
but once I found myself,
I did not know what to do,
like a dog chasing her tail,
I found myself askew,
I wish these tears would stop,
there flowing way to fast,
I'm so unsure, on how Ill even last.

The author's comments:
This is just a cry for affection

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This article has 7 comments.

on Feb. 15 2013 at 12:27 am
AudrithMcfarland SILVER, Milwaukie, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"One day I'll be something. And it'll be the last thing I'll ever be."

This is so wonderful! Im using it for a project in my English class. Dont stop writing!

ValleyMae13 said...
on Feb. 14 2013 at 5:53 pm
Oh my God I love all of yalls comments thank you for commenting :) it made me very happy :)

on Feb. 14 2013 at 4:22 pm
SapphireLamour DIAMOND, Omaha, Nebraska
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Beautiful! Just make sure you don't settle for less affection than you deserve and don't forget that you do deserve affection. You are a very talented writer  

on Feb. 14 2013 at 12:17 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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I like how you started this poem because it grabs the reader and actually makes them care and take it to mind.

on Feb. 14 2013 at 11:30 am
MarieAntoinette2014 DIAMOND, Scottsburg, Indiana
54 articles 2 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isn't it ironic? We ignore the ones who adore us, adore the ones who ignore us, love the ones who hurt us, and hurt the ones that love us.

Hey, I understand how you feel. I'm reading this on Valentine's Day after fighting with my boyfriend. The articles I read mean something to me. Other wise, I wouldn't skip luch to be on here.

on Feb. 13 2013 at 11:13 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I feel like you and I are exactly the same... At least from reading your other poem and now this one too. You are an amazing person and God loves you! Just remember that:)

on Feb. 13 2013 at 10:11 pm
Positivity_At_Its_Finest DIAMOND, Morrow, Georgia
56 articles 2 photos 148 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a stage, get on it and perform your best act.

i know exactly how you feel, seriously. just keep living, it'll get better.