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Alone in a Room Full of People on a Tuesday Evening

January 25, 2013
By AmyLeigh GOLD, Pompton Lakes, New Jersey
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“One thing about human beings that puzzles me the most is their conscious effort to be connected with the object of their affection even if it kills them slowly within.”
- Sigmund Freud

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she stretched her hand out towards the static
hearing the whispers retreat into their hollow shells

and that was the time she decided to love herself
because she figured somebody had to

© Monica L., St. George, UT

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AmyLeigh GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 6:54 pm
AmyLeigh GOLD, Pompton Lakes, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
“One thing about human beings that puzzles me the most is their conscious effort to be connected with the object of their affection even if it kills them slowly within.”
- Sigmund Freud

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thank you! i kind of wanted this to be a shorter poem because i think i conveyed everything i wanted in the 2 stanzas i had, but i totally get what you're saying and when i'm editing i'll see if adding a few more is the way i want to go! :)
Nicksamson BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 1:01 pm
Nicksamson BRONZE, Bhuj, Other
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"One must not allow the clock and the calendar to blind him to the fact that each moment of life is a mystery and a miracle."
- an old British novelist.

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Nice! I liked it. but i think you need to add a few more paras so as to make it more interesing and fun to read.