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will you come?

December 6, 2012
By Anonymous

when i die
i want you to go with me
ill be afriad
cant move
will be scared
willl you come
help me fall?
you will hold my hand
one last touch to help me
we part



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MikeTheDude said...
on Dec. 22 2012 at 9:04 pm
I liked this poem alot. Why didnt you capitalize? It made it a little hard to understand. Again, tho, loved this piece. Very heartfelt!

januaryChick said...
on Dec. 22 2012 at 9:02 pm
wow, i love this poem! will you post any more? i gave it 5/5!

pg17 said...
on Dec. 18 2012 at 10:28 am
very pretty, ya

on Dec. 18 2012 at 10:27 am
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
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"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

WOW!  u know i've read this before u posted it, but i'll say it again...pretty! XD