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Dagger of Pure Copper

December 7, 2012
By amrex13 GOLD, Patchogue, New York
amrex13 GOLD, Patchogue, New York
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Daggers of pure copper
which in the light would glow,
slipped past my defenses and
Plunged deep into my soul.
The daggers, they were hidden.
Concealed within the dark.
I didn't even realize
until they stabbed my heart.
I felt them pierce my skin,
so gently in they slid.
A phantom pain persisted,
but from my fears I hid.
I though that I'd bleed steel,
but what I saw was red.
Twas only then I realized
I would soon be dead.
I wanted to be happy,
I thought I could be saved.
But to those copper daggers,
I had been enslaved.
My strength started falter
I tried to parry blows.
But from my torn up chest,
blood started to flow.
I fell upon the ground,
And stared up at the sky.
Twas there I'd be found dead.
Twas there that I would die.
Above me, copper daggers,
which in the light would glow.
They glinted in the moonlight,
my lifeless body below.



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amrex13 GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2013 at 12:48 am
amrex13 GOLD, Patchogue, New York
13 articles 0 photos 14 comments
Thank you so much!

easop1 said...
on Dec. 16 2012 at 1:18 pm
Wow.  Beautiful.  Keep writing!