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November 29, 2012
By mseiner GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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mseiner GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
“What makes the desert beautiful,” said the little prince, “is that somewhere it hides a well…”
-The Little Prince

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You make me feel
like my heart
is the center of Rome
and the year is 467 B.C.
I'm falling for you.

© Julia K., Old Tappan, NJ

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on Sep. 5 2015 at 2:20 pm
gotmar19 BRONZE, Elm Grove, Wisconsin
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Hi! I enjoyed this poem, but you might want to change the date to 476 A.D., as that was when Rome actually fell.