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My Heart

November 13, 2012
By Anonymous

It takes a beating
Standing strong
Blow for blow
Looking like Rocky Balboa
After it gets in the ring with you
But you still think it’s a joke
But no matter how hard you bash and bruise it, its still
My heart

It gets bloody
Flying through the battlefield
Shouting its war cry
Trying to win against your formidable tactics
It shall raise the colors
Showing its undying will
To win you over.

It shall make you see
What I have done for you
Instead of ignoring it kneeling
At your feet
Pleading for you to understand
That I love you
With all
My heart

But you still treat it like a joke
Leaving it to cry and choke
On the lies you’ve fed it
Polluted by the smoke
Of burnt dreams
And shriveling up
Unrecognizable as
My heart.


The author's comments:
To the victims of mind games.

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on Nov. 28 2012 at 2:51 pm
CorySchoonover BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"You miss 100% of the oppurtunities you don't take"
"Even if you fall on your face, atleast you're moving forward"

I like the truness of the whole poem. I believe that a lot of people can relate to this. "It shall make you see what I have done for you..But you still treat it like a joke." I LOVE that line!

on Nov. 28 2012 at 2:48 pm
Kongmeng_T. BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
My quote would be "Give it your all, don't lose hope".

This stanza really stood out to me: "It shall make you see What I have done for you Instead of ignoring it kneeling  At your feet  Pleading for you to understand That I love you With all My heart" This piece tells me how much emotion it has telling her how much he would do for her. Very nice piece of work.

bubbles318 said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 12:41 pm
bubbles318, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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the rocky referance caught my eye and really made me read. i loved how relatable this was and how it was so easy to read

on Nov. 28 2012 at 12:37 pm
CalynMaeW. BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Some say the world will end in fire. Others in ice.

I like how you use the battlefeild metaphor. It's a really good poem:)

livss BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 12:29 pm
livss BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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i like how you put so much detail into this piece.