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You left me there...

October 18, 2012
By MeganHope BRONZE, Saybrook, Illinois
MeganHope BRONZE, Saybrook, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
She paints a pretty picture, but the story has a twist.
Her paintbrush is her razor, and her canvass is her wrist.

The cuts and bruises,
lift away the pain.
The razor,
slicing away at my wrist.
The blood,
pouring out like rain.
The bruises,
having and unexpected twist.
The lost soul,
weeping away at what once was.
filling my brain.
only because,
You left me there.
To lie down,
and breathe in the uncontrollable, damp, and crying rain.

The author's comments:
This is a deep peice that is a little bit more about cutting yourself, and the addictions going on inside the human mind while proceeding to do so.

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on Nov. 5 2012 at 8:26 pm
TheLovelyRose GOLD, Saginaw, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Too many favorite quotes to pick just one. ☺

I love this poem...really i do. I am stunned an otherwise speechless.