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A Rainy Day

September 17, 2012
By bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
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bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
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Love is a two way street. If you find yourself on a one-way road, it's time to take the next turn off.

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The thunder is booming with madness
The rain is sadly thumping across the floor
The mud squashing with terror
The clouds are grey with anger
The lightning glowing with red hot anger and disappearing like a ghost that's been seen
The roof's knocking with sadness in its heart
The shoes walking across the ground furious, squeaking with tears
The sky is black and scared while a chill comes across the earth
The sun disappearing with a shriek of sadness
It says bye bye world
Everything is so furious, so sad with tears

© Laura M., Eagan, MN

The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was in second grade. It has been published in two poetry books. (one children's poetry book and another that does not include age.) I won second place in a children's poetry contest, woo!(:
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bagley777 GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2012 at 9:04 pm
bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a two way street. If you find yourself on a one-way road, it&#039;s time to take the next turn off.

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aww thanks so much!(:
LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2012 at 9:01 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Because I can!-Me &quot;Life is a choice and death is a decision&quot;-Lil Wayne

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That was d.a.m.n. good! Expecialy for a second grader.