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Perfect You

August 9, 2012
By bepin SILVER, Lake Villa, Illinois
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bepin SILVER, Lake Villa, Illinois
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Dont ever let anyone tell you the sky's the limit when there's footprints on the moon.

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You're on my mind everyday of the week,
Your presence makes it hard to speak.
Your eyes shine bright,
But your smile lights,
Up the room in which we stand,
Hand in hand.
Your touch electrifies every nerve in my body,
I can distinguish your laugh out of everybody.
Your kiss is a rose that's been plucked of its thorns,
You posses nothing that resembles the Devil's horns.
You're the sweetest gift that has ever been given.
You're the reason I'm still living'
I love you more than words can say,
I will love you every night and day.
And until our time has come to pass,
I would have loved you more than any love could last.

© Yaniris M., Boston, MA

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albinotiger GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2012 at 7:27 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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&quot;Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win&quot;- Stephen King<br /> &ldquo;In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate&rdquo;- Isaac Asimov

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while reading this i could acually feel the emotion! u r really good !! lots of talent and maybe check ot my work sometime :)