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Coming down

July 23, 2012
By Douglasscar GOLD, Louisville, Kentucky
Douglasscar GOLD, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
Keep writing


lights cover the sky
as angels fly down
playing their harps
and singing their songs
their voices are pure
never missing a note
as they play their harp
and when they do so
the passage of time is blurred
when they come from the heavens


The author's comments:
Despite it mentions angels and the heavens doesn't necessarily mean its religious

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on Aug. 2 2012 at 7:01 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace.&quot;<br /> -Avenged Sevenfold

Hmmmm..... not sure how I feel about this one. It's good, I'm just not sure that it's my type of writing. 

on Aug. 2 2012 at 4:38 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!<br /> &quot;Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing&quot; Benjamin Franklin

Nice and the picture was like made for your poem. Godd job!