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Storm of Love

June 29, 2012
By rocn121 SILVER, Machias, New York
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"One Good thing about music, is when it hits you, you feel no pain"-Bob Marley

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The Storm begins
The Rain starts to fall
Softly at first
Then
Pounding mercesisly on everything below
We run out into the rain
It slips right through our fingers
Falls down on us
Washing away all the sorrows and tears of the past
We dance until it hurts
Me and him
A heavy cloud looms above us
Staring at us, waiting to tear our love apart
We grow stronger
Refusing to remember the bad times
I look above me
The cloud now replaced by sunlight
He takes my hand
As we walk off into the sunset
Our love never stronger

© Carly M., Hopedale, MA

The author's comments:
What ispired me to write this piece was that love can have it's bad moments, but that you can get through the tough times and remembering all the good times.
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