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Unforgettable

June 24, 2012
By pitt98 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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pitt98 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"It's not the days in life we remember, rather the moments." 
- Walt Disney

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Walking down the street,
An old friend,
The girl of Himmel Street
Never made my acquaintance,
Until now
Breezes blow pieces,
Dandelions
Through the air like people who left her
Accordions by the river,
The woman who called her Sakurel
And the boy whose hair remained the same forever
Such a melancholy day,
looking back,
A person who helped me
Feel in existence

© Preston M., Galesburg, IL

The author's comments:
This poem is in the perspective of death from the book The Book Thief
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pitt98 GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2012 at 11:12 pm
pitt98 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
10 articles 3 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s not the days in life we remember, rather the moments.&quot; 
- Walt Disney

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Thanks for the feedback :)
T_M_66 SILVER said...
on Jun. 30 2012 at 11:11 pm
T_M_66 SILVER, Anderson, California
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I am not pretty. I am not beautiful. I am as radiant as the sun.

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This has great potential to be a wonderful poem if it was just a little bit longer.  You are a good poet in my opinion just maybe make it a little longer.  Keep it up! :)