Rainbow | Teen Ink


June 13, 2012
By xxRozxx BRONZE, Fairytopia, Other
xxRozxx BRONZE, Fairytopia, Other
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It was an exhausting day,
And I was on my way,
back from school,
in the afternoon .

Suddenly , it started raining heavily.
I hurried up and stood under a tree.
After some time , when the rain stopped,
Up in the sky when I looked,

There was a rainbow,
This was the best one I ever saw.
So colourful,
So beautiful,
I locked the picture in my heart ,
And kept moving forward.

The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was 11.....

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on Aug. 2 2012 at 1:53 am
Vile1067 SILVER, Hamilton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
We enjoy the night, the darkness, where we can do things that aren't acceptable in the light. Night is when we slake our thirst.

Hmm... Its short but sweet.

on Jul. 17 2012 at 9:20 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

This is a cute poem, and I think it describes the rainbow nicely. But it seems a bit rushed, maybe you could elaborate some more? Anyway, I liked it, keep writing :)