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The Journey Of My Tears

May 14, 2012
By snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
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snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
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"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, but I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

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Cascading one by one;
from the creases of my bloodshot eyes
L
down the hook of my polluted nose
O
through the crimson pastels on my lips
V
over the tiers of my cobweb dress
E
and onto the welcome mat that no longer is...

© Sahrash C., East Windsor, CT

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beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on May. 25 2012 at 11:34 am
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Well, I liked it but it was just okay for me. I think you could've expanded on this poem. I like that the poem kind of tapers off, leaving the reader to wonder why the speaker is crying, but I don't know, I just would've liked it a little longer.