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Dead and Gone

March 17, 2012
By brokenroad GOLD, Scottsburg, Indiana
brokenroad GOLD, Scottsburg, Indiana
10 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life And if You'll Die Tomorrow. Dream As if You'll Live Forever.


Black as night,
cold as you,
sharp like a knife,
your love cuts through,
who I used to be is dead and gone,
now the only thing I have ever loved
is gone along with the old me,
now all I am is dark and cold,
lost and helpless without a soul,
you stole my heart,
my love, who I truly was,
but I still seem to want you.

The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this I'm not for sure, I've had so many things happen to me and the people that I love and really care about.

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on Apr. 5 2012 at 10:16 am
brokenroad GOLD, Scottsburg, Indiana
10 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life And if You'll Die Tomorrow. Dream As if You'll Live Forever.

I ment to reply you that not comment  -_- 

on Apr. 5 2012 at 10:15 am
brokenroad GOLD, Scottsburg, Indiana
10 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life And if You'll Die Tomorrow. Dream As if You'll Live Forever.

Thanks I really appreciate it.

on Mar. 30 2012 at 1:13 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Beautifully dark, this flows really well and your imagery is incredible!