Dominos | Teen Ink


March 16, 2012
By -Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
-Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
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She wants to die. She wants to disappear, to be remembered no more. She wants so terribly to be forgotten, all her mistakes, all her failures, everything. Her name to be wiped free from all record of existence. Because is it really existing when you’ve got nothing to show for your life?

Sometimes something goes wrong,
Something falls before its time,
No one is to fault,
No matter how hard you look,
Like dominos falling,
It starts as something small,
But the next thing you know,
Your whole world has fallen down at your feet,
You can try to reassemble it,
But no matter how hard you try,
It will never be the same again,
For the dominos have fallen.

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on Apr. 5 2012 at 9:19 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

I like the title in correcpondence to the poem. Nice job, i like the simplicity!

keven_j BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 4:20 pm
keven_j BRONZE, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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very good :)

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on Mar. 21 2012 at 6:30 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Cool and simple :) nice :)