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"I love you too"

March 11, 2012
By writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."
-J.K.Rowling

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Tears streaming down my face
Like a gentle waterfall
All my secrets leaking out
And you read them all

With arms wide open
You were calling
With arms wide open
I came running

My face is wet
My eyes are red
You read my book
With nothing said

The need for speech is growing
But it is hard to say a word
So you went first
“ I love you”
It took me by surprise
And then I realized
“ I love you too”

© Chuck K., Marblehead, MA

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This is based on a really emotional moment in my life. I hope you like it.
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In_Love_with_Writing GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 8:18 pm
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

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Very very beautiful writing. Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my stories. It means so much to me!
writer3499 GOLD said...
on Sep. 10 2012 at 3:03 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."
-J.K.Rowling

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Thanks everyone I really appreciate what you have to say!
garshongjasmine SILVER said...
on Sep. 10 2012 at 2:40 pm
garshongjasmine SILVER, Accra, Other
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happiness resides not in possesions, and not in gold, the feeling of happiness dwells in the soul























-democritus

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i hardly read a piece over.. but i read yours over and over and over and over!!! great work... love this  
psnipes23 SILVER said...
on Sep. 9 2012 at 10:29 pm
psnipes23 SILVER, Easley, South Carolina
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that's a very pleasing and relatable piece, very nice work
StellaDPloom SILVER said...
on Aug. 19 2012 at 8:56 am
StellaDPloom SILVER, Hudson, New Hampshire
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"The road to hell is paved with adverbs."
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Wow! This was so amazing, and beautiful! I love it, good work!
bluhs said...
on Aug. 18 2012 at 7:33 pm
bluhs, E, Alabama
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Wow! This is really good.Great job :)
pratyasha BRONZE said...
on Aug. 13 2012 at 8:11 am
pratyasha BRONZE, Kolkata, Other
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"Behind every beautiful thing there is some kind of pain."

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couldn't unerstand the first stanza....but the later ones were appreciable
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2012 at 5:25 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

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This is really good! I liked it! :) AWESOME!!
Bookwizard PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2012 at 1:26 pm
Bookwizard PLATINUM, Watertown, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If you love something, let it go. If it comes back it was always yours, if it doesn't it never was.

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This is really good and I love how you captured the moment. My favorite part is the 2nd verse.
Bookwizard PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2012 at 1:26 pm
Bookwizard PLATINUM, Watertown, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If you love something, let it go. If it comes back it was always yours, if it doesn't it never was.

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This is really good and I love how you captured the moment. My favorite part is the 2nd verse.
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on May. 12 2012 at 6:42 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Great job! Very emotional! Loved every word! :)(:
stillheartless PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2012 at 6:09 pm
stillheartless PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you. I love you. I send this message through my fingers and into his, up his arm and into his heart. Hear me. I love you. And I'm sorry to leave you." -Jenny Downham

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This is amazing! I really really like it. Would you mind checking out my work possibly?
justlookin said...
on Mar. 18 2012 at 5:51 pm

Great look at a very tight bond

ubroken by "betrayal!"

Missy1999 SILVER said...
on Mar. 13 2012 at 1:14 pm
Missy1999 SILVER, Windermere, Florida
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John 3:16

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This is beautiful!