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Fallen

January 9, 2012
By ElJay SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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ElJay SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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"Make noise while you can, after a while the world shuts you up."

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As if you pushed me off a cliff, I've fallen in love.
Free falling at light speed.
More turbulent than the making of a milkshake.
I hurtle towards heartbreak and headache.
Some nights I stay awake and think of the day I will call you mine.
Give me my moment and I will shine.
A trophy like you is so divine.
No, I wouldn't die for you, but I'd live to make you smile.
I won't stop until we're walking down the aisle.

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LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on May. 1 2013 at 1:55 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

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There's always some gems lines in your poems. See what you're doing in these and implement them towards an entire project. I love the opening line, and the not wanting to die but live to make her smile. Good play-on-thoughts! Keep pursuing excellence, because you have the potential to reach it!
youngwriter10 SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 4:09 pm
youngwriter10 SILVER, Redmond, Oregon
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&quot;We&#039;ve all heard that we have to learn from our mistakes, but I think it&#039;s more important to learn from successes. If you learn only from your mistakes, you are inclined to learn only errors.&quot;<br /> -Norman Vincent Peale

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Nice job very descriptive!!!
ElJay SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 10:23 pm
ElJay SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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Guys thank you so much
Acastillo GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 9:40 pm
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Really liked it, it was very sweet, nice job! :D
Wildflower30 SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 12:12 am
Wildflower30 SILVER, Kolkata, Other
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Lovely! :)