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A Knife

January 1, 2012
By shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
We must become the change we want to see
-Mahatma Gandhi


A knife scraping inside of me
Hidden well so you can not see
This pain was never self inflicted
Every speck of hope evicted
You pulled the wool over my eyes
In order to hide all your lies
I only wish that I had known
That all my freedom had just flown
The second I replied to you
But it was exciting, something new
It had to be the words you said
That got you locked up in my head
I live for every promise made
Still waiting for fulfilment laid
It will get better so you say
Yet, soon continue your abrade
Though now as I admit the truth
I will always love you for you.


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AvaJay GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 9:40 pm
AvaJay GOLD, Spokane, Washington
13 articles 4 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me not pray to be sheltered from dangers, but to be fearless in facing them. Let me not pray for the stilling of my pain, but for the heart to conquer it.
~ Tagore

Wow, very strong and well written! Keep up the amazing work!

on Jan. 4 2012 at 8:20 pm
shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
We must become the change we want to see
-Mahatma Gandhi

Thank you! :)

on Jan. 4 2012 at 8:16 pm
GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
23 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"....I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad, The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had...."
-Tears of Fears-Mad World

Hey Gabbie again, ur an amazin poet

on Jan. 4 2012 at 4:07 pm
leaf44 PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
20 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Truth is stranger than fiction because fiction has to make sense."
"Be careful, or you'll end up in my novel."

This is good. I like the idea and the poem flowed well - nice rhymes