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did not say
November 18, 2011
sunset fades the day slips away along with all the things you did not say what would have changed what things might be if only you said what you wanted it burns you inside burns you alive as it eats at your conscious and tears away at your life speak up and spread light
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Prometheus PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:08 pm
Sorry if I offended you... just my honest opinion.
kaylarocks SILVER said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 7:10 pm
umm, sorry mikes my buddie and im honna have to stand up for him, i dont care if this peom is good or bad please keep the negatives away from this, its a scriblle to you and a piece of work to him, i really dont like confronting people but friends do thingd for friends snd thats an action ii just did.
Prometheus PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 4:37 pm
Even if you don't want to edit your poem, you should at least try to separate it into stanzas. Or capitalize. Or use punctuation. Right now it's really nothing more than a scribble.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 10:13 pm
I think it's missing something, I'd almost say that maybe you need to restructure it, but when I really start to think, it's perfectly structured just the way it is, it really reads like a slowly sinking, striped sunset :)
TheNerdGirl PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 2:46 pm
hey its alex might be late to chat mom is taking me to one of my uncles shows will be done at 8:30 but i still might but 10 or 15 minutes late sorry dont be mad
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 10:25 pm
Not bad, I like the imagery :D You've only been here like 7 days? Newbie XD When can I find you on the TI Chat? And btw, I love Ranger's Apprentice too! <3
NeverSayShhh SILVER said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 12:03 pm
i agree with penny but otherwise its good (:
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