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October 31, 2011
By Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

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It's been eating me up for weeks.
I've received many looks of concern.
A few reach out only to be pushed away.
I keep quiet -everything but nothing to say.
I want so bad to tell.
Just so I can get some advice on what to do
but deep inside I know I can't tell you.

© Grace L., Bacolod City, Philippines

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I know that this piece may seem kind of confusing. That's how I wrote it because that's how I felt at the time. Confused.
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n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:40 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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&quot;It&#039;s better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Luara Moncur

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same here!! I dont feel as alone in this great big world anymore!
Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:37 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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glad I am not the only one who feels this way!!
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:12 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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&quot;It&#039;s better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Luara Moncur

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yeah the biggest for me is what they will think so i end up bottling it up and never letting it out...which is worse than having the whole world hate you because you end up hating yourself for keeping quiet
Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:01 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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I agree. I have trouble finding someone to trust because you never know who they will tell, what they will do or if they will judge. Definitely one of the hardest decisions I face on a regular basis. Thank you for your comments!
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 6:54 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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&quot;It&#039;s better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Luara Moncur

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I can totally read this and im not a bit confused because ive felt this way once to many times...it sad though that im not the onl one who isnt sure who to trust or who to talk...Maybe one day well all find the right person to 'tell'
Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 7:57 am
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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thank you for your comment :) Don't be afraid to post stuff...most likely there is another person who is feeling the same way and they would be happy to read what you have written.
Ranea GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 10:49 pm
Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
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&quot;It can always be worse, so put on a happy face and laugh!&quot; (my own quote) &amp;<br /> &quot;Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may scar my soul.&quot;

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good work, ive kinda written a couple like this but have been so afraid of posting them cause i didn't want others to laugh at what ive gone through/felt/written