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Gone.

October 7, 2011
By Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

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Gone,
Erased,
Vanished,
Replaced.
Only one, but
Not unique
Others will come
Others will take
Others will become me,
When I am gone,
When I’m pushed on,
When I’m no more.

© Kelly B., Wichita, KS

The author's comments:
I really hope you like this, tell me what you think. I wrote this on the bus, while listening to a group of middle-school kids, comparing their grades... and realized that I was in their place; but now, they had replaced me. Which made me think; How can I impact everything around me? What will I leave behind when I am gone? Will it all be as though I never existed?
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Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 13 2012 at 8:37 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

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Thank you!
yazigirl BRONZE said...
on Mar. 13 2012 at 4:43 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
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&quot;people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here&quot;- one tree hill

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i really like this. it was very good, and although short very well writen!
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 2:25 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

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I'm really glad you do, it means a lot
Miranda_K. BRONZE said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 9:56 pm
Miranda_K. BRONZE, Donora, Pennsylvania
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I am only one, but still I am one; I cannot do everything but still I can do something; and because I cannot do everything I will not refuse to do something I can do.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~ Edward E. Hale

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It's no problem. I love your work ^-^
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 8:50 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my pieces!
Miranda_K. BRONZE said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 8:12 am
Miranda_K. BRONZE, Donora, Pennsylvania
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I am only one, but still I am one; I cannot do everything but still I can do something; and because I cannot do everything I will not refuse to do something I can do.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~ Edward E. Hale

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It was kind of short but the message was clear and powerful
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 2:10 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

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Thank you, and sure, I'll look at your work when I have more time :)
AmayaSakaruta said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 11:20 am
AmayaSakaruta, Borger, Texas
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From out of the night that covers me, black as the pit from pole to pole, i thank whatever gods may be, for my unconquerable soul. -William Earnest Henley<br /> Though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I shall fear no evil. -the Bible

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i dont unerstand all of it, but that's the mark of good poetry. it holds the most value for you, and everyone else sees it differently and attaches different value to it...i think you did a good job expressing yourself. SHAMELESS SELF PROMOTION! could you pretty please look at some of my poetry, and give feedback?
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 3:45 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

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Thank you!
theunimaginable BRONZE said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 9:32 am
theunimaginable BRONZE, Koshkonong, Missouri
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Live for today, not the past nor future. - Me :)

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I like this a lot.