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Million Times Better

October 2, 2011
By turtlepenguin BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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turtlepenguin BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
&lrm;&quot;Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don&#039;t matter, and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Dr. Seuss<br /> <br /> &quot;Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it.&quot; --Confucius

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Seeing the world as a
sand box,
will always be a
Million
times better than seeing it as a
filing cabinet.

Using finger paints to
express feelings,
will always be a
Million
times better than using
The Finger.

© Kaelee L., Petersburg, MI

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turtlepenguin BRONZE said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 10:42 am
turtlepenguin BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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&lrm;&quot;Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don&#039;t matter, and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Dr. Seuss<br /> <br /> &quot;Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it.&quot; --Confucius

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Thanks :) Yea, that does make sense. I did have another stanza in there but my teacher didn't like it so I took it out...
Kev-Girl SILVER said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 10:35 am
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :) <br /> <br /> Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing. <br /> <br /> If you cant annoy someone, there&#039;s no point in writing.<br /> <br /> Love is overrated, marry for money.

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I like the idea of the poem, but I do have a couple things to say. One, I think it might flow a bit better if you wrote it like this; 

 

Seeing the world 

As a sand box, 

Will always be 

A million times better 

Than seeing it as 

A filing cabinet. 

 

Get what I mean? Another thing would be that I think the poem could be longer. But it's really good! I love the last stanza! haha great job!