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Loneliness
July 24, 2011
When I was alone
Everything went around
Then my happiness was gone
It was not just me, for loneliness I had found
Was made to think all over again and again
Of what I had lost and wrong done
Conceivably, I would feel in vain
And think to fulfill my destiny and wills
Was made to creep deep into my sorrows
And to think apparently of my fails
Logically, not wanting a life as it pointlessly goes
For how I missed good times I was on
Perhaps, I did thank loneliness
But not with him, went further
He heartlessly jumped into me without my expectation.
Chased loneliness and slightly thought of being filled with mirth and never just bother.
© Becky G., Westerville, OH
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AyeshaLiveLaughLove BRONZE said...
on Jun. 23 2012 at 12:06 pm
First of all, great poem! The message of this poem was present throughout and the way you gave it increasingly more power was through your outstanding sense of language. I applaud you for this amazing piece!
Fairy_Me said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 2:17 am
I love this poem!!
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 12:00 pm
i shud be thankful, anyway! ;)
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 11:58 am
u r awesome dude! ;) thanx btw...
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 4:58 am
loneliness sucks make friends and u wont b lonely btw it was an amazing poem lol:)
butterfly123 said...
on Dec. 22 2011 at 10:18 am
awesome poem! like it a lot!
zee11 said...
on Dec. 22 2011 at 9:47 am
You've got a nice way of putting your feelings down in words...keep it up!!!!
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:15 am
very good keep up the good work
