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The Disaster of Words

July 2, 2011
By kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.


Will had everything he needed
except the strength to pull through
he got good grades
he would help anyone in need
his parents didn't know
about the cuts on his wrist
isolates himself from everyone

Will didn't come home one night
went to his hill and watched the water
crashing against the sharp black rocks
on that hill sat two other boys
called him names
made him believe that nobody cared
before their eyes
he jumped to end his life
right one the spot

Just realize what words can do
years of torment
school does nothing
loss of the life
of beautiful people

I fall down not to be caught.


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on Feb. 3 2012 at 12:07 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

Thank you so much(: and sure(:

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 1:59 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Amazing. I am speechless. Really, Really good. I loved it - almost made me feel like I was there when it happened. Could you check out my poem, Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter?