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June 30, 2011
By owkey BRONZE, Markham, Other
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Black and brown all aroun'
Grabbing unto my eye's attention
Begging for more, it holds me captive.
Like a tsunami crashing, crushing beneath.
It draws me deeper within Zebra Valley
Sparks shoot from their prisons like miniature comets
It's over for now.
Draped in uniform,
It will return.
Again, and again.

© Hannah B., Princeton, IL

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MidnightWriter SILVER said...
on Aug. 30 2011 at 9:22 am
MidnightWriter SILVER, Ontario, Other
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Writers are a less dangerous version of the career criminal. Everywhere they go, they see the potential for the perfect crime. The difference is that writers have better self control.

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We did have tornado warning the other day, although my town seems to be a pocket of some sort. Storms never seem to be as bad as they are in the surronding towns.
owkey BRONZE said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:50 pm
owkey BRONZE, Markham, Other
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Ya without the Waterloo distinction I'd have no idea where that is XD are you guys getting tornado warnings too?
owkey BRONZE said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:49 pm
owkey BRONZE, Markham, Other
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There's quite a few Canadians on here :O
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 1:02 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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As IntrepidRose said, this piece has great imagery.  I really don't have any criticism.

I'm Canadian too, by the way! :)

MidnightWriter SILVER said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 12:38 pm
MidnightWriter SILVER, Ontario, Other
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I've been to Toronto a couple of times. It's a great looking city, judging by the tiny bit I saw. Ontario's my province too. I'm from Elmira, a small town near Kitchner/Waterloo (if that means anything to you)
owkey BRONZE said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 11:08 pm
owkey BRONZE, Markham, Other
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Ya same here bud. I'm from Toronto. How about you?
MidnightWriter SILVER said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 6:45 pm
MidnightWriter SILVER, Ontario, Other
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Writers are a less dangerous version of the career criminal. Everywhere they go, they see the potential for the perfect crime. The difference is that writers have better self control.

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Interesting piece. I like the imagery. By the way, I noticed you're Canadian. I am too. It's always nice to meet someone who shares my country.
owkey BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 12:36 pm
owkey BRONZE, Markham, Other
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Thank you :D Btw there's actually a s tory behind this but it's kinda immature xD
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 4:04 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

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Your style of writing is so unique. You should post more! This is great! :)