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One Step Further

June 19, 2011
By HannahBK SILVER, Discovery Bay, Other
HannahBK SILVER, Discovery Bay, Other
6 articles 4 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is the only escape from reality"


I catch a glimpse over the mountain
I have spent so long ascending;
The tips of grass are beginning to wake below the
Snow caps that have built up for years and years.

I continually lose my footing;
The icy path is slippery and deceiving
And the uneven rocks I step over
Move in unexpected ways.

One more step, I keep hearing
One more
And you’ll be free.
But how many more could one step be?

The footprints are haunting,
each in an individual way.
Some of them are so striking,
That I wonder if they actually belong to me.

I stand at the peak
Looking down either side of me.
It would be so easy to slide down the wet trodden path
Rather than hike down the further rocky but dry land.

And so I stand,
Without the knowledge of
What was or
What is or
What will be;

And I realize just how human I truly am.


The author's comments:
This piece is about my recovery from depression: the state of mind where I want to move forward, but find it so much easier to fall backwards instead.

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on Jul. 21 2011 at 6:34 am
HannahBK SILVER, Discovery Bay, Other
6 articles 4 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is the only escape from reality"

Thank you!!

 


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on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:20 am
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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This is beautiful...haunting.  I love the last stanza and last line!