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A View To Far

June 30, 2011
By CJK0298 PLATINUM, Brighton, Michigan
CJK0298 PLATINUM, Brighton, Michigan
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A view to far
To see the end
I wait thinking of some way to breathe.
As the waves violently smash across the silk sand
I drift closer awaiting their frozen touch

I stand there feeling cool liquid dancing
Threw my toes, feet
To stand so free I am
Thankful
The sound so elegant and near
Whispering a lullaby
A young child’s goodnight
Soothing, relaxing, calming

The stinging smell of salt, I inhale
It’s sharp smell so strong
And it dances, lingering in my nose
Touching my senses

I hear a call and I wish not to go
Leaving behind my one true love
My hand crawls to the
Sand
Keepsake
Till I return
Again
To a few to far


The author's comments:
i was at the beach one day and it was so peaceful, so I based this poem off of it :)

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on Jul. 12 2011 at 8:29 pm
dancerkao BRONZE, Brighton, Michigan
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i love it! its sooo good!

on Jul. 5 2011 at 5:41 pm
makes me think of my beach!!  come see me!!