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A Sweet Release

May 31, 2011
By WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

With eagerness burning,
She gazes beyond the stars.
Pondering the true meaning of life.
All of her belief's, depleted.
Her pure inquisition.
Is there a God?
Will He forgive me?
Will He save me from my faults?
Question's she wails, to an evening sky.
Yet, no answers are endured.
To live, striving to quench an assumed "God's" thirst.
To please him.
To be infallible.
Obviously, an unimaginable milestone.
She envisions such a life, and attains her own belief.
To one who lives such a horror...
A fall-out of faith... or even death may be a sweet release.

The author's comments:
I do believe in God, but this poem is not meant to be sacreligious.
It is to portray the single question, every person on this Earth asks.

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on Oct. 1 2011 at 9:48 pm
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
21 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
Love Always. :)
When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don't waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

Wow. This is so....just wow! I don't really have words! This is very deep, really causes you to think, and is beautifully writen! I'm so impressed and inspired by your work! Keep writing! You have an amazing talent!