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Immobilized

June 5, 2011
By tianaxbiddy SILVER, Wareham, Massachusetts
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&quot;Plot is character revealed by action.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Aristotle

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Thinking in immobilized silence
The pain runs from their veins
Suffering forever
They die slowly with each other
They call each others name
Through the never ending darkness
Bound together forever with tears and blood
Through words unspoken
Together they rise in darkness
Their room stays the same
The door always closed
As they lay still
Tears falling
Holding each other
They seem frozen
Heading towards a promised future
Protecting each other until the end
They love only each other unchangingly
Gazing in each others eyes only.

© Sandy H., Woodbridge, CT

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i know the last word is spelled wrong but it won't fix it for me. The right form isn't there, so sorry
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