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Crimson Lotus

June 5, 2011
By tianaxbiddy SILVER, Wareham, Massachusetts
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tianaxbiddy SILVER, Wareham, Massachusetts
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&quot;Plot is character revealed by action.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Aristotle

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The crimson lotus blooms
Only with her tears
Her mind seems to sleep
Her connection is forever lost
How can she be released before her breaking?
The rain of sadness
Follows with the crying of the lotus
She doesn't want to see another day
Her blocked ears go to white
Her weak heartbeat fades slowly
The lotus fades too
WIth both comes another bloom

© Brianna D., Everson, WA

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I wrote this when I was going through a very rough time and i was extremely upset.
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