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May 25, 2011
By Kaleighgirl97 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
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Kaleighgirl97 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
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&quot;When the rich wage war its the poor who die.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Jean-Paul Sartre.

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You were my heart,
you were my soul.
I was the horse you were the cart.
Trapped inside a bowl,
Sides coated with slippery misery.
With a lid made of heartbreak trapping me in.
You were the glue to my puzzle,
The clay of my sculpture,
If you vanished I would fall apart.
You were my mind,
You were my sanity.
Without you I don't know what I'll be.

© Alexa T., Pompton Plains, NJ

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NinjaGirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 5:41 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.<br /> ~Some random person on the Internet :P

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Very good! I liked the repetition of "you were"
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 4:39 pm
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When the rich wage war its the poor who die.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Jean-Paul Sartre.

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lol tahnks im trying to improve.
sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 11:43 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See&#039;s a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u&#039;ll surely B successful in LIFE.<br /> -Hazrat Ali (A.S)

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Really beautiful..And i think you could improve and write the best poems teen ink has ever seen ...:)!
renni SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 9:52 pm
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.

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lol, if u want u could look at my work, but if u don't that's alright. lol :D 
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 4:15 pm
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When the rich wage war its the poor who die.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Jean-Paul Sartre.

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lol thanks. do you have anywork yoiu want me to loook at?
renni SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 3:27 pm
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.

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we'll im glad you posted it :D 
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 12:09 pm
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;When the rich wage war its the poor who die.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Jean-Paul Sartre.

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thankyou! i thought it sounded kindof sappy and i wasnt gonna post it but my sis convinced me it couldnt hurt.
renni SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2011 at 2:11 pm
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.

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beautiful!! :D