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April 4, 2011
By Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
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Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
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&quot;Cowards die many times before their deaths, The valiant never taste of death but once.&quot; - Spakespeare<br /> Life is pain, Highness. Anyone who tells you differently is selling something ~Wesley<br /> Dare to move~ A Walk to Remember

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I see the blood
Beautiful red blood
It runs it all directions
Spreading away from me.
I take a deep breath and
Close my eyes, seeing his beautiful face
He's so scared,
he holds my body trying
Oh, so hard to bring me back
Undo my doings.
I love him for it but i gave up
I whisper to him
" Live on...for both of us. "

© Jack B., Central City, KY

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i wrote this when i was very depressed and would appreciated comments
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Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2012 at 7:04 pm
Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Cowards die many times before their deaths, The valiant never taste of death but once.&quot; - Spakespeare<br /> Life is pain, Highness. Anyone who tells you differently is selling something ~Wesley<br /> Dare to move~ A Walk to Remember

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It was supposed to be a little on the disturbed side. :) But thank you 
surfergirl98 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 21 2012 at 6:58 pm
surfergirl98 PLATINUM, Roseville, CA, California
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&quot;never give up on something you couldn&#039;t go a day with out thinking about.&quot; <br /> -myself

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this is awesome.  little disturbing though. but i praise your work

 

Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2012 at 6:43 pm
Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
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&quot;Cowards die many times before their deaths, The valiant never taste of death but once.&quot; - Spakespeare<br /> Life is pain, Highness. Anyone who tells you differently is selling something ~Wesley<br /> Dare to move~ A Walk to Remember

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Thank you very much, I am doing a lot better since I wrote this :) a lot happier too :)
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on Mar. 21 2012 at 6:39 pm
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This is so sad!! It has a lot of emotion in it. I really like your personification.. nicely done! Hang in there!! :)
3mo_sw33ts SILVER said...
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I am crying!!! *sniff*
Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 4:14 pm
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Life gets rough but I'm making a clean start this year. thank you though :)
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 4:08 pm
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Oh my gosh, this is so sad...:( I am so sorry you were this depressed but the poem is really good......its so sad :,(
BeautysBeast GOLD said...
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beautifully sad