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Fire Dream MAG

April 6, 2011
By Crossfire SILVER, Duncan, South Carolina
Crossfire SILVER, Duncan, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I want to be brave, and selfless, and smart, and kind, and honest. I'm still working on kind..." ~ Four A.K.A Tobias

I once had a dream
That was full of fire
Full of all the hate in the world.

Corruption is everywhere
And fire follows in its wake
Governments are corrupt,
And fire razes them down.

Poverty is everywhere
And fire is always with them
People go hungry,
And fire burns them out.

Injustice is everywhere
And fire plays with it
People get killed,
And fire laughs in your face.

I once had a dream
That was full of fire
And fire never went away,
Fire stayed 'til the end of time.

The author's comments:
I did have a dream, full of all the wrong in the world...

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This article has 4 comments.

on Aug. 26 2016 at 11:26 am
Breanna_Valentine PLATINUM, Sullivan, Ohio
20 articles 8 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope for the best and prepare for the worst."
"Everything happens for a reason."
Every day do something that will inch you closer to a better tomorrow.
Doug Firebaugh

You are going to make it somewhere with this writing. Please keep following your dreams!!!

on Dec. 4 2013 at 9:19 am
GreekGoddess BRONZE, Andover, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The unprepared rebel dies in the fire."

Hey this is really good, with great ideas behind it. I agree with Mariah, you need stronger words. Besides of that, this was really good :)

on May. 13 2013 at 10:28 am
MariahPotter PLATINUM, Lansing, Michigan
39 articles 8 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We dream in our waking moments, and walk in our sleep.” -scarlett letter

I love how you incorperated fire into your phrases about corruption and poverty and hate. That's interesting to combine the thought of troubles and hardships with fire and that's really original and creative. However, I think if you used words a little more menacing like, devastation, tyranny, melicious, torrment. That would highten emotions even more! But awesome work!

on Nov. 5 2011 at 6:39 pm
tr3bl3grrl SILVER, Lincoln, Nebraska
8 articles 5 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fascinating. I am being possessed by unspeakable evil." --Tweek, Avalon #7
OR... "THE HUNKY-DORY THING ZAPPED ME!!" --Trunko, Ugly Doll Show.

I love it! Plz keep writing!