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In my eyes

May 13, 2011
By tortor1129 BRONZE, Midlothian, Virginia
tortor1129 BRONZE, Midlothian, Virginia
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The water beneath my feet
The feel of the wind on my face and blowing my hair
The smell of sea salt fills the air
I close my eyes and seal this image tight
My best friend and family by my side does not compare to what I see in your eyes
I feel your presence your very being
Sitting next to me looking out at the endless sea
I rest my head on your shoulder
You wrap your arms around me tight
I feel safe in your arms
You whisper I’ll always be here
I turn red as a rose in the morning dew
I feel the beat of your heart against mine
The way you feel with the ocean mist
I feel the sand beneath my feet as much as I feel your heat
I stare at you
You stare at me
Our eyes looking into each other’s soul
I get up and run, smiling, laughing
You chase after, lift me up and swing me around
You put me down and smile
I smile back
I wrap my arms around your neck
Pull you in and kiss your full lips, soft and warm as a rose petal
Then I wake up and your sleeping next to me
I gaze with intense desire, smile, lay down by your side and go to sleep


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i just always liked writing

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on May. 20 2011 at 1:44 pm
soccerfreak6 BRONZE, Lapeer, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself -hilary duff

i really enjoyed this poem. you are a great writer!

on May. 20 2011 at 10:47 am
LilGirlBadd17 PLATINUM, Saluda, South Carolina
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"Life To Short To Live With Reqrets"

A great write; that's what you are.

on May. 20 2011 at 8:15 am
kaykay101 PLATINUM, Arundel, Maine
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this is amazing! great job!

LauWind BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2011 at 9:59 pm
LauWind BRONZE, Cream Ridge, New Jersey
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"Do not let small minds tell you that your dreams are too big."

i loved it (:

on May. 19 2011 at 7:00 pm
tortor1129 BRONZE, Midlothian, Virginia
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thanks so much guys that really means a lot :)

on May. 19 2011 at 2:04 pm
Jessi-ca SILVER, Arvada, Colorado
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love it great job

on May. 19 2011 at 11:55 am
RachelHuber BRONZE, Hilltown, Pennsylvania
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this is so loving and just breathe taking. keep up the writting

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on May. 19 2011 at 10:04 am
Catiebugg GOLD, Plainwell, Michigan
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You can kill the dreamer, but not the dream.<br /> I am not crazy, my reality is just different than yours.<br /> True love stories never have an ending.

Beautiful.

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on May. 18 2011 at 7:51 am
vampier BRONZE, Glasgow, Kentucky
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i like this poem lol