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Give In...

March 17, 2011
By BitterSweet1993 SILVER, Bronx, New York
BitterSweet1993 SILVER, Bronx, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Love is only a dirty trick played on us to achieve continuation of the species. ~W. Somerset Maugham, A Writer's Notebook, 1949


The pain in your soul,
Drips fast from your eyes.
It bleeds a deep river in your heart,
Splitting it far apart.
Far enough to cause irreversible damage.
Will you let me hold you together?
Before you split apart too far?

Will you trust your pain in my hands?
I promise to ease it,
I won't help it to grow,
But, just to lessen.
If you give in to my love,
One day soon,
You will watch your pain, float away.
It wont leave any scars, not even a memory.
As long as you just give in to my love.



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on Jun. 21 2011 at 9:31 pm
BitterSweet1993 SILVER, Bronx, New York
5 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is only a dirty trick played on us to achieve continuation of the species. ~W. Somerset Maugham, A Writer's Notebook, 1949

Thank you. <3 this means alot that it reached someone else other than myself. 

on Jun. 14 2011 at 4:03 pm
freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Saul saw Goliath as too big to kill. David saw he was too big to miss.
W.W.J.D.

This really spoke to me. Love it.