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March 2, 2011
By domin0 SILVER, Royal Oak, Michigan
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&quot;The problem with quotes on the Internet is that it is hard to verify their authenticity&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Abraham Lincoln

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As I walked down
That gloomy grey street,
I saw two bright stars
Coming to meet,
What was once my life
But now is no more ,
For those two bright stars
Had two closed doors.

© Chris C., Pequannock, NJ

The author's comments:
This piece was a short piece but i felt it kind of made you wonder till the end what the two stars were, and the two doors were supposed to tell you that the stars were the headlights on a car.
I got this idea just from thinking and day dreaming.
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crazy fan said...
on Apr. 24 2011 at 4:05 pm
amazing... and depressing