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Landlocked Sunset

February 26, 2011
By TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
34 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)

Eyes close,
Cars breathe by.
Shore sighed,
Peaceful crashing.

Eyes close,
Boundless sheen.
Expanse of city light,
Restful sparkle.

G'night, sea.

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leafy said...
on Apr. 2 2011 at 7:11 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion. 
Ernest Hemingway: I hate it. 
Gil: You haven't even read it yet. 
Ernest Hemingway: If it's bad, I'll hate it. If it's good, then I'll be envious and hate it even more. You don't want the opinion of another writer. 

i thought this poem was well-written. keep up the good work!

on Apr. 2 2011 at 5:55 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
42 articles 11 photos 333 comments
I really like it, especially the last line where you say "g'night" instead of "goodnight". It adds character.

on Apr. 2 2011 at 3:29 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Very good! Great imagery! It's so peaceful and calm sounding. :)

on Apr. 1 2011 at 11:32 pm
LittleMidnight PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
28 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is but a book just waiting to be filled, you make your own story

Took me awhile to figure it out but I got it. I like this one!!!!! Although I dont really live in a place with big lights I could really see this. Good job!