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Life to Finish

February 4, 2011
By EmityRowe BRONZE, Piqua, Ohio
EmityRowe BRONZE, Piqua, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"We're all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." --Oscar Wilde


The facts point to an entity,
A finite form of infinity.
A time where time begain.
A day where matter didn't matter.
The gap in space between the stars,
Does God shake the hand of the man in the moon?
A dense world blows my mind.
The expansion to the milky way

Enstien supressing realitivity;
To me is creativity
To compute the things relevent to reality
I am no more a mortal man
Than any man before.

I am as I thought
And I thought as I am.
I love the world,
Yet it scares the hell out of me.
Does that leave just one option?
Am I nothing more than a broken-wing dove?
Is this all there is to see?
Or is there more beyond the sea?

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on Feb. 18 2011 at 10:01 am
EmityRowe BRONZE, Piqua, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"We're all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." --Oscar Wilde

Oh, I understand you now. I misunderstood. And don't be sorry. It's all kool. And also thanks.

on Feb. 17 2011 at 7:02 pm
BlackMoonWhiteSky PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
44 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thus is life, live it, or die trying!

No, no. I meant it as a complement. I meant that it sounds good, it has a nice flow and it's fun to hear aloud.

Is that a better way of saying it?

Sorry if my phrasing made what I said sound like an insult, that was not my intent.


on Feb. 17 2011 at 10:02 am
EmityRowe BRONZE, Piqua, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." --Oscar Wilde

I can't say i really took that as a compliment....

on Feb. 16 2011 at 1:52 pm
BlackMoonWhiteSky PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
44 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thus is life, live it, or die trying!

Whoa. Now that was just amusing. Makes me want to read it over and over for the fun of it.

on Feb. 15 2011 at 9:27 pm
dolphin13 BRONZE, North St. Paul, Minnesota
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Interesting. It has very nice word play and I like the overall idea. Keep writing!