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Unseen

December 26, 2010
By Jayde_Marie_95 GOLD, Los Banos, California
Jayde_Marie_95 GOLD, Los Banos, California
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She sits alone and wonders why
Why she can’t be like other kids
Why she can’t be what her parents want
She sits at home and starts to cry
She cries because it isn’t fair
She hates seeing things that really aren’t there
Tries and tries to tell someone—anyone who will listen
No one does, because no one cares
Everyone just pretends she isn’t there
Her parents stopped trying
Her friends lost interest
She sat alone and thought up a solution to all her problems
It wouldn’t take long and no one would notice
She sat alone and created her chemical concoction
No one noticed when the girl went missing
No one noticed when the girl quit breathing


The author's comments:
Just one of those things that pop into your head and you get the feeling that you absolutely have to write it down.

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on Jan. 17 2011 at 2:34 pm
Jayde_Marie_95 GOLD, Los Banos, California
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll definitely check out some of your work.

on Jan. 15 2011 at 9:37 pm
falling10ssupernova SILVER, Warwick, New York
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wow really great took my breath away check out some of my stuff if you get a chance