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Falling Too Hard

November 13, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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When I fall,
I fall hard.
With him I'm falling off a cliff.
I try to catch myself with my arms.
It hurts like hell.
But better two broken arms,
Than a broken heart...
Right?

© Sophie P., Potomac, MD

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Funny how guys make us feel huh?
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Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 12:05 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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atthought i responded already. hes my brother. nobody calls him aaron. what kind of name is aaron? i put two up. itll take a minute. would you read me on the monkey? anything new you wrote?
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 2:33 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Oh gosh that's awful! luckily there aren't any cliffs around my house or around anywhere i go riding. is he Derek you friend or family?
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 8 2011 at 5:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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Derek almost fell off the cliff cause his horse was stupid. he would've been gone. it wasnt one of those "yeah I fell but i got right back up" cliffs, it was one of those "why the heck dont they have railings around the edge of this sucker?" cliffs.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 8 2011 at 4:31 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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haha they're great! the brown quarter horse's name is Isidar and she's 5 i think and her half-sister is a white and brown paint named Whisper! Whisper is like a giant puppy - she follows you around everywhere!
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 8 2011 at 12:32 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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Well, in correspondence to those, I like zebras, brocolli, and ice cream sandwiches. milk and brownies are also nice. So, how's about them there horses...
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 5:51 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Aw really? I love horses, trees, and Blue Bell vanilla icecream! hahaha
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 1:16 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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no derogatism intended captain, its just that... i really do love raccoons and marshmellows.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 10:28 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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haha i am good country folk but you make me sound like a country hick out in the sticks! haha which i am not by the way
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 1 2011 at 7:56 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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perhaps we could dance hunt marshmellows and dance with raccoons near an unconvincing campfire-that is, if you are good country folk. n'inquiter pas.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 26 2011 at 3:14 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Thanks so much! i appreciate it
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 26 2011 at 3:14 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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oooo ok cool ill have to check out some of her work and sorry i haven't replied for a while i've been soooo busy and my internet is soooo slow! that's what we get for living out in the country but it's worth it!
Chibbie1 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 9:05 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

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I completly can relate to this poem. Great job.

 

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 22 2011 at 7:13 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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on teenink..she wrote something that i liked. she was her before you, and by "here" i mean engaging with me in conversations like these that were probrably around before we were.
alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 7:57 pm
haha no i don't lol! and i've started to break through the block! woo! and what's thesilentraven???
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 7:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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hmmm...do you steal wifi? we do. (evil grin). i was supposed to write something for thesilentraven, tsk...about that.....
alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 5:29 pm
haha yeah i expect stuff to pop into my head buuuuut....my head has been aching lately like right now is a pounding pain through my skull! but maybe i should just try to sit and write too! and my internet has been crazy the past few day because techonology hates me which is why my phone isn't working at all!
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 12:57 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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Oh, there you are-didnt know you respondededededed captain. i do hate the writers block. funny thing i discovered is: if you actually have something to help you write like...i dont know...a pen or...some paper maybe...well then you can write! who knew? i should try that. i never actually sit down and try to write, i just expect the material to pop into my head, which is probrably why it does, just as rarely as it does, which could be why i haventwritteninages or, why i cant spell. i wish i knew the other computer had internet all this time. i would've updated my game. and we're sittin here wondering why the internettals are charging her all this money. "oh, you mean we have service?" i love this song. but, about you....
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 4:32 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Hahahaha :D!!!! Yes lets bust a move!!! ok i've had writer's block for over 3 weeks and it's just driving me INSANE!!!!! Soooo you're not alone with your writer's block
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 5:59 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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the first happens more to me than the second and the second happens more to me than the first ; D. i really should get on that shouldn't I?
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 4:28 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Oh yea i really hate that when you've got a good poem but you cant think of a title that's just as good or better - happens to me all the time. and sometimes i can think of a really good, attention-grabbing title but not a poem to go with it :