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I Love You

October 13, 2010
By loveee7 DIAMOND, San Pedro, California
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loveee7 DIAMOND, San Pedro, California
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"If Your One In A Million Than There's A Million Other People Just Like You."

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She looks at him, and smiles.
He thinks about her, and just laughs.
Two best friends;
He loves her
She loves him
But then won't say it.
They stay up all night
Just to talk.
That's when he says it
Those three words
I love you.
They become inseparable
Joined at the hip
Linked by hands
And that's the way it was,
No one interfered with them.
They were soulmates.
Together in love, forever.

© Mary A., Fullerton, CA

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wefellinLAVA PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 28 2010 at 2:03 am
wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
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&#039;you touched my heart, through it&#039;s shell&#039;

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I think you started out really well, but I feel like something was missing in the middle.  I feel as though there may be a lack of depth.